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Good and whimsical 😏😳👌🏻
I'm not seeing any male weight gain pics
I have a Poke-girl gain story I think many here would enjoy. It has some uh... adult themes so I can't post the story on Deviantart. But here's a link
pastebin.com/u/TheLodgeBeaver
pastebin.com/u/TheLodgeBeaver
Where's the mature stuff?
I don't think it's that bad.
I don't think it's that bad.
I'm not talking about that greentext rubbish, I'm talking about the many chapters of Alola Girls. They (meaning the mature content) are definitely there. Pops in during chapter 1, and re-occurs pretty regularly throughout many of the chapters.
Ok, I read more of it. Maybe you should post it elsewhere. Say, chyoa.com/.
My main criticism is the lack of focus. The story feels like a revolving door of characters so that the story never focuses on anything- gaining, story, or character arcs.
I think the character list should be shrunk to something more manageable and there should be a focus on them+ the overarching story so that a reader can actually be invested in those characters.
I haven't read the entire thing, but I do like the concept.
My main criticism is the lack of focus. The story feels like a revolving door of characters so that the story never focuses on anything- gaining, story, or character arcs.
I think the character list should be shrunk to something more manageable and there should be a focus on them+ the overarching story so that a reader can actually be invested in those characters.
I haven't read the entire thing, but I do like the concept.
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Still not letting me submit to "males" folder... :<